Writers, teachers, and scholars enjoy working as writing
consultants for a variety of reasons, such as working one-on-one with writers
of various levels and in various disciplines and having the opportunity to
observe writers as they develop confidence in their writing ability. Many of us
also enjoy the work of consulting because it makes us better writers, teachers,
and scholars ourselves, as the act of consulting encourages us to examine and
make adjustments to our own habits.
While the writer’s toolkit is certainly vast, two important
tools for writers, particularly those in academic settings, are planning and
time management. Although planning can sometimes be the most difficult part of
the writing process, it is a valuable way for a writer to organize his or her
thoughts.
Luckily, planning and time management are two skills that can be
easily incorporated into writing consultations, not only by addressing them
directly but also by modeling these skills within the context of the session. In
this post, I’m going to focus on strategies for opening and closing the
standard, 50-minute writing consultation that will allow you to model planning
and time management for your writers.
Opening the Session
Taking the
time for a thorough intake process allows you and the writer to make an
effective plan for the session, while also allowing you both to develop a plan
for revision past the session. I suggest asking the following questions to help
you assess the writers’ needs:
What type of document are you working on? What are the
requirements/restrictions on this document (i.e. topic, page/word count, source
or citation requirements, etc.)? [Asking these questions should help you to
better understand the document, and will also allow you to gauge the writer’s
understanding of the document requirements.]
When is the document due? [Asking this question will allow
you to better plan the session as well as manage the writer’s expectations. For
example, if the document is due later that day, your recommendations for
revision would be much more restrictive than if the writer had two weeks to
revise the document.]
What stage of the writing process are you in? [Asking this
question allows you to determine if the writer is in the planning, writing, or
revising stage of the document, and can also give you an idea of how long the
writer has been working on the particular document. For example, the feedback
you offer to a writer who has written a first draft of an essay will be much
different than the feedback you might offer a writer who is working on
polishing the final draft of an essay that he or she has been working on for
several weeks.]
What do you want to accomplish in this session? [Asking this
question not only helps you to assess the writer’s needs, but it also
reinforces the agency of the writer. Additionally, this question can allow you
to manage a writer’s expectations, when necessary. For example, if a writer
tells you her goal for the session is to address organization and grammar in a
20-page paper, you can explain to her that you might get through 5-6 pages in a
standard, 50-minute session.]
After asking these questions, I find it very helpful to work
with the writer to develop a plan for the session, and I recommend sketching
this plan out on a piece of paper. While it is not always necessary to attach
time frames to the elements of the plan, in some sessions, time frames can be
very helpful in keeping the writer (and yourself) on track.
As an example, imagine that you are working with a writer
who tells you that he is working on a second draft of a 10-page term paper for
his Film and Culture course, which is due in 2 weeks, and requires 10 academic
sources, cited in Chicago style. The writer tells you that his goal for the
session is to focus on organization and focus, and that he is particularly
concerned about making sure that his argument supports his thesis statement,
but that he is also worried about making sure that he is citing his sources
correctly, both in-text and in the bibliography. The writer also understands
that you may not make it through the entire paper in one standard, 50-minute
session. In this situation, you and the student might create a plan like this
one:
- 10 minutes – intake
- 5 minutes – focus on introduction and thesis statement
- 5 minutes – writer verbally outlines his plan for the paper, based on his thesis statement
- 20 minutes – read through paper, focusing on organization, focus, and in-text citations
- 5 minutes – briefly review bibliography; point writer to resources for Chicago style
- 5 minutes – close the session by briefly reviewing the session and helping the writer to develop a plan for revision
Closing the Session
Closing the session can be just as important as opening the session. While it can be tempting to actively work with a writer until the very last minute of a session, doing so can leave the writer feeling confused about how to execute the ideas discussed during the session. So, it always a good idea of leave the last 5-10 minutes of the session to talk about how the writer can move forward with the revision process.
Closing the session can be just as important as opening the session. While it can be tempting to actively work with a writer until the very last minute of a session, doing so can leave the writer feeling confused about how to execute the ideas discussed during the session. So, it always a good idea of leave the last 5-10 minutes of the session to talk about how the writer can move forward with the revision process.
First,
you’ll likely want to remind the writer of the main suggestions for revision
you discussed during the session. To extend the example used above, you might
remind your writer that, in addition to reorganizing the body paragraphs to
mimic the organization of ideas in the thesis statement, he should also make
sure that each paragraph has a strong topic sentence. Additionally, you might
remind the writer that some of his in-text citations contain a comma, which is
unnecessary in Chicago style.
Then, you’ll
want to help the writer articulate a plan for revising, which might include
making additional appointments. For example, our writer’s plan might look like
this:
Today:
1/15/16
- Revise based on today’s session: 1/15/16-1/18/16 (3 days)
- Begin with focus, making sure that each paragraph has a strong topic sentence that supports the thesis.
- Next, reorganize paragraphs to ensure that the organization of ideas in the body supports the organizations of ideas established in the thesis statement.
- Then, make sure that all of your in-text citations are consistent.
- Second Writing Studio appointment: 1/19/16
- Revision based on second Studio session: 1/19/16-1/25/16
- Final Writing Studio appointment: 1/26/16
- Revision based on third Studio session: 1/26/16-1/27/16
- Proofreading and Edition: 1/27/17-1/28/16
- Submit assignment: 1/29/16
Not only
will a plan like this one help your writer begin to process the work of the
session, and also allows the writer to envision how to approach the often
daunting task of continued revision. Additionally, encouraging writers to make
additional appointments before leaving the space can also encourage them to
maintain momentum in the revision process by providing a deadline of sorts.
Conclusion
I hope you
can see the benefits of using these tips not only for your writer, but for
yourselves, as well. In order for you to provide each writer with your full
attention and the best possible feedback, it is important than you have time to
recharge and reorient yourself between sessions. Extending your session past
the closing time, or taking a writer early, is not beneficial for the writer,
yourself, or your fellow consultants. However, making sure that you begin and
end sessions on time establishes the Studio as a place of reliability and
consistency, while taking the time to plan at the beginning and end of the
session extends the Studio’s mission of approaching writing as a process and
recursive practice.
By Sandy Branham, PhD candidate in Texts & Technology and Assistant Coordinator for the University of South Florida's Writing Studio